Soft does play the music from far away
To the tune of which we once did sway
So close so close were we
fired with love
consumed by ecstasy
hold her did I in a tight embrace
Nothing could come between us not time, not space
Breath to breath
Heart to heart
Nothing of this world could tear us apart
when time does stop will we part
until then , forever
you will be in my heart....
4 comments:
its really nice...u do hav a flair for writing poems...
Uh. First of all, and you should expect this from me, but it isn't 'tare' it's 'tear' (unless you're making an obscure reference to Poe).
Secondly, it's nice, but dude get rid of 'em cliches. That's what makes 'meh' great, originality.
dudee!!!...these lines are awesone yaar..seriously,if i fall in love then i'll use these lines on my love ..hehe
well impressive josh....sint know ur sucha good poet..hhehe...well bro keep goin...hu told u to get into engineering shit....u should have made this ur career...heheheh...tc miss ya...
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